Hi Rita, love your descriptive sentences about volcanoes, some really great imagery. I would say my favourite thing about volcanoes in Auckland is they add character to the Auckland landscape and they are not active.
Kia ora Rita, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "As the skies darkened and clouds rose, the fire lit up the sky..." I can just imagine this happening - very scary! You can be proud of this work - ka pai Rita!
Hi Rita I'd have to agree with Mr P, we are so lucky in Auckland to have all the volcanic cones in our backyard. I like to walk to the top of Owairaka and look around the city and see all of the other volcanoes.
Kia ora Rita. Wow, I really love the adjectives you have used in your writing. 'Oozes, terrifying, skies darkened'. These are great words that help to create a picture in my mind. My favourite part of volcanoes is how they explosively erupt. Even though it is very dangerous, I think they are visually stunning.
Hi Rita, love your descriptive sentences about volcanoes, some really great imagery. I would say my favourite thing about volcanoes in Auckland is they add character to the Auckland landscape and they are not active.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rita, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "As the skies darkened and clouds rose, the fire lit up the sky..." I can just imagine this happening - very scary! You can be proud of this work - ka pai Rita!
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ReplyDeleteI'd have to agree with Mr P, we are so lucky in Auckland to have all the volcanic cones in our backyard. I like to walk to the top of Owairaka and look around the city and see all of the other volcanoes.
Kia ora Rita. Wow, I really love the adjectives you have used in your writing. 'Oozes, terrifying, skies darkened'. These are great words that help to create a picture in my mind. My favourite part of volcanoes is how they explosively erupt. Even though it is very dangerous, I think they are visually stunning.
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